[ALIGN=center][SIZE=5]乡愁[/SIZE][/ALIGN][ALIGN=center][SIZE=5][/SIZE][/ALIGN][ALIGN=center]高密市柴沟中学[FACE=Times New Roman]  [/FACE]王忠友  邮编：261519[/ALIGN]
[SIZE=4]千里之外 [FACE=Times New Roman] [/SIZE]曲折迂回的小路[/FACE]
[SIZE=4]是一缕绵绵的乡愁[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]挥之不去的[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]是那故乡的云[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]载不动的[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]是那浓浓的乡愁[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]一千次一万次的凝望[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]你的眉头深锁我的喜与忧[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4][/SIZE]
[SIZE=4][FACE=Times New Roman] [/SIZE]千里之外[FACE=Times New Roman] [/FACE]曲折迂回的小路是[/FACE]
[SIZE=4]一只不归的候鸟[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]栖在异地的枝头[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]唱着那首古老的歌谣[FACE=Times New Roman] [/SIZE][/FACE]
[SIZE=4][/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]故乡的云[FACE=Times New Roman]  [/SIZE][/FACE]
[SIZE=4]淡淡地飘[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]故乡的水[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]悄悄地流[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]故乡的人 [/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]慢慢的老[FACE=Times New Roman] [/SIZE][/FACE]
[SIZE=4][/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]弯弯的脊背[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]犁铧着那片希望[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]岁月的老茧[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]凝在手上[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]深刻的皱纹[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]画在脸上[FACE=Times New Roman] [/SIZE][/FACE]
[SIZE=4][/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]饮一杯浓浓的烈酒[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]难醉那思乡的愁肠[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]愁[FACE=Times New Roman]  [/SIZE]愁老父疲惫的伤残身躯[/FACE]
[SIZE=4]愁[FACE=Times New Roman]  [/SIZE]愁老母零乱的白发满头[FACE=Times New Roman] [/FACE][/FACE]
[SIZE=4][/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]饮一杯浓浓的乡愁[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]望断南飞雁[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]父也乡愁[/SIZE]
[SIZE=4]母也乡愁[/SIZE][ALIGN=center][FACE=Times New Roman][/FACE][/ALIGN]

感觉还好，句式整齐。